WALKING DISTANCE
Originally
Broadcast October 30, 1959
- 1. Ext. Sky [Night]
- Shot of the sky...the various nebulae and planet bodies stand out in sharp,
sparkling relief. As the CAMERA begins a SLOW PAN across the Heavens
- Narrator's Voice (o.s.)
- There is a fifth dimension beyond that which is known to man. It is a dimension as vast as space and timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of man's fears and the summit of his knowledge. This is the dimension of imagination. It is an area which we call The Twilight Zone.
The CAMERA has begun to PAN DOWN until it passes the horizon
and is flush on the OPENING SHOT (EACH WEEK THE OPENING SHOT OF
THE PLAY)
- 2. Ext. Small two pump gas station [Day]
Long shot looking beyond it up the road
- A small red foreign car approaches toward the CAMERA, slows down, then
pulls into the gas station. At the wheel is Martin Sloan, a man
in his middle thirties. He shuts off the ignition after stopping
the car by one of the pumps, closes his eyes for a moment, then
looks at the attendant who's working on an engine part in front
of the station. Martin presses down on the horn two or three times,
angry, impatient calls for service. The attendant looks up at him,
very slowly and deliberately puts the engine part down. Martin
honks once more.
- Attendant
- Whenever you're finished, mister.
- Martin
- What about some service?
- Attendant
- What about some quiet?
- 3. Close shot Martin
- As he suddenly unbends. His features sag, he bites his lip.
- Martin
(softly)
- I'm sorry.
- (as the attendant approaches him)
- Would you fill it up, please?
- Attendant
- Sure.
- Martin
(still rather softly)
- I said I was sorry.
- Attendant
(looks over his shoulder)
- I heard you.
- 4. Close shot Martin
- As he looks at himself in the rear view mirror of the car. Over this we
hear the Narrator's voice.
- Narrator's Voice
- The mirror image of Martin Sloan. Age thirty-six. Occupation vice president, ad agency, in charge of media. This is not just a Sunday drive for Martin Sloan. He perhaps doesn't know it at the time...but it's an exodus. Somewhere up the road he's looking for sanity. (a pause) And somewhere up the road he'll find something else.
DISSOLVE TO:
OPENING BILLBOARD
FIRST COMMERCIAL
FADE ON:
- 5. Ext. Gas station [Day] Full Shot
- Martin gets out of the car and walks over to the pump.
- 6. Two Shot Martin and the Attendant
- Attendant
(turns to him)
- Oil change and lube job is that what you want?
Martin nods.
- Attendant
- It'll take about an hour.
- Martin
- All right.
- (he turns to look toward the road)
- That's Homewood up ahead, isn't it?
- Attendant
- Yep. A mile and a quarter.
- Martin
- I used to live there. Grew up there as a matter of face. I haven't been back in twenty twenty-five years.
- 7. Track shot Martin
- As he takes a few steps away from the pump, half way to the road, his back
to the attendant.
- Martin
- Twenty twenty-five years. And then yesterday afternoon I...I just got in the car and drove. Reached a point where I, well...I had to get out of New York. One more board meeting, phone call, report, problem
- (he laughs but the laugh comes out in a strained, sick kind of way)
- I'd have probably jumped out of a window.
- 8. Close shot Martin
- He lets his face relax, embarrassed by the intensity of the tone. He turns
to look at the attendant again.
- Martin
- Walking distance, is it?
- 9. Med. close shot Attendant
- Attendant
- About a mile and a half.
- 10. Close shot Martin
- Martin
(softly)
- That's walking distance.
- 11. Pan shot over to mirror over the cigarette machine
- We see Martin's reflection on the road in the middle of a long walk off
into the distance.
LAP DISSOLVE TO:
- 12. Reflection of Martin in drugstore mirror
- As he's just entering.
- 13. Int. Drugstore Full shot The Room
- A soda jerk named Charlie sits on a stool behind the fountain reading a
magazine, occasionally taking a drag of a cigar which he puts back
into an ashtray under the counter. The subtle suggestion of the
room is that it's old-fashioned. The equipment is from twenty years
ago. The ads are not flamboyantly old, but as a part of a whole
they look different in a subtle way. Martin walks into the
store, looks around briefly, smiles at what he sees, goes over
to the counter, nods at the soda jerk who puts the cigar down and
rises, walks to a point opposite him behind the fountain counter.
- Charlie
- What'll it be?
- Martin
(pushing down a kind of excitement that comes from being back in this place)
- You still make great chocolate sodas? Three scoops?
- Charlie
(looking at him a little fish-eyed)
- How's that?
- Martin
(laughs softly, and a little apologetically)
- I used to spend half my life in this drugstore. I grew up here. The one thing I remember always ordering that was a chocolate ice cream soda with three scoops and it was ten cents too.
The soda jerk looks at him a little quizzically then shrugs, turns, starts to fix the soda. Every now and then he looks at the reflection of Martin in the mirror. Martin is looking around the room.
- Martin
- You know, you look familiar to me, as if I'd seen you before.
- Charlie
(shrugs)
- I got that kind of a face.
- Martin
- It's been a long time. Twenty years. That's when I left here.
- (then he laughs at some collection of secret thoughts)
- I wish I had a buck for every hour I sat at this fountain though, from grammar school right through third year high.
- (then he turns and looks toward the front door)
- The town looks the same, too.
- (he turns back to Charlie)
- Really amazing, you know? In twenty years to look so exactly the same.
The soda jerk stirs the soda, carries it over to him, puts it down in front
of him, takes a paper napkin, lays it alongside.
- Charlie
- That'll be a dime.
Martin starts to fish in his pocket, then stops abruptly, then incredulously
- Martin
- A dime?
- (he holds the soda up)
- Three scoops?
- Charlie
- That's the way we make them.
- Martin
(laughs)
- You're gonna lose your shirt. Nobody sells sodas for a dime anymore.
- Charlie
- They don't? Where you from?
- Martin
- New York.
- (he takes a sip of the soda, spoons down some ice cream)
- You make a great soda.
He takes another swig from the soda.
- Charlie
- Taste okay?
- Martin
- Wonderful.
There's a few slurping sounds from the bottom of the glass as the last of the
soda disappears. Martin puts the glass back on the counter, looks around
again.
- Martin
- Funny. How many memories you connect with a place. I always thought if I ever came back here it'd probably be all changed.
- (he looks around the store)
- But it's just as if I'd left yesterday.
- (he rises and goes to the front door, stares out at the street)
- Just as if I'd been away over night.
- (he turns back, smiles toward the soda jerk)
- I'd almost expect Mr. Wilson to be sitting in the stock room and sleeping just like he always did before he died. That's one of the images I have. Old Man Wilson sleeping in his big comfortable chair in the other room.
- (he points to the far door at the other end of the room, then reaches in his pocket, takes out a dollar bill, takes it over to the counter, puts it down)
- Thanks very much.
- Charlie
(stares at the bill)
- That's a buck!
- Martin
(smiles, taps the glass then makes a motion to include the whole room)
- That..and this, it's worth it.
He turns, walks back to the door and goes outside. The soda jerk shakes
his head as if just not understanding the complexity of that man, takes
the glass, puts it in the sink. In doing so he notices a couple of open
syrup containers, checks them, then walks over toward the door at the
far end of the room. THE CAMERA BEHIND HIM now, looks toward the room
where a white haired man sits dozing in a big old-fashioned chair.
- Charlie
- Mr. Wilson?
The old man opens his eyes, takes a deep breath, smacks his lips, rubs his jaw part of a ritual of waking up.
- Wilson
- Yup, Charlie?
- Charlie
- We're gonna need some more chocolate syrup, Mr. Wilson.
- Wilson
(nods)
- I'll order some this afternoon.
Then he winks, grins, closes his eyes and goes back to sleep as we:
DISSOLVE TO:
- 14. Ext. Residential street long shot looking down the street
- Martin comes into the frame, his back to the camera. He stops, then turns
profile to camera to look from house to house. There's a smile
on his face as if this too were part of a memory that all fitted
into place.
- 15. Track shot with him
- As he walks down the street studying the houses, nodding occasionally.
- 16. Track shot closer on Martin
- As he calls off the names of the houses.
- Martin
- Van Buren. Wilcox.
- (then looking across the street)
- Over there Dr. Bradbury. Mulroony.
Then he looks back on his side of the street again and stops.
- 17. Med. long shot small boy
- Kneeling down in his front yard playing marbles by himself. Martin comes
into the frame.
- 18. Close profile shot Martin
- He smiles and then laughs softly.
- 19. Two shot Martin and the boy
- As the boy looks up at him.
- Boy
- Hi.
- Martin
(points to the marbles)
- You pretty good?
- Boy
- At aggies? Not bad.
- Martin
- I used to shoot marbles too. We gave them special names.
- (he holds up his fingers to form a circle)
- The steel kind...the ball bearings we got off streetcars we called them steelies. And the ones you could see through they were clearies. Still call them names like that?
The boy slowly rises, studying Martin with great interest but with a hint of trepidation. He nods.
- Boy
- Sure.
- Martin
(points to telephone pole)
- And over there we used to play hide and seek.
- (he smiles again. It's almost as if he were dredging up these memories for himself and putting them out into the air)
- Draw a circle around the old man's back and who's to punch it.
- (then he laughs, shakes his head, looks down at the boy again)
- Right on this street, too. Right over there. And I used to live in that corner house down there.
- (he points)
- The big white one.
- Boy
- The Sloan house?
- Martin
(a little wide eyed)
- That's right! You still call it that?
- Boy
- Still call it what?
- Martin
- The Sloan house. My name's Sloan. I'm Martin Sloan. What's your name?
He holds out a hand. The boy backs away, frightened.
- Boy
- You're not Marty Sloan. I know Marty Sloan and you're not him.
- Martin
- I'm not, huh?
- (he reaches into his coat pocket, takes out a wallet)
- Let's see what the driver's license says, huh?
- 20. Close shot his hands
- Opening the wallet.
- 21. Med. close shot Martin
- As he looks down at it and then holds it out.
- Martin
- See?
- 22. Med. close shot spot on sidewalk
- Where the boy was. He's no longer there. Martin looks off in the direction
of the boy's exit. His face is suddenly thoughtful, then he turns
and looks down the street and he starts to walk.
- 23. Long shot Martin
- As he approaches the camera. He's now at the corner and he stops and studies
the house in front of him, a big white two story Victorian. A white
fence surrounds it. He slowly reaches down and unlatches the front
gate, walks up the front walk up the steps, stands by the front
door.
- 24. Close shot his hand
- As it very slowly reaches for the bell. He pushes the button. There's the
sound of footsteps from inside. The door opens. A middle aged man
stands there. He smiles warmly.
- Man
- Yes?
- 25. Close shot Martin
- His eyes wide, his face goes white, and he just stands there, stock still,
silently.
- 26. Two shot
- Man
(his smile fading a little)
- Yes? Who did you want to see?
- Martin
(his voice almost a whisper)
- Dad. Dad.
- Woman's Voice
(from inside the house)
- Who is it, Robert?
- Martin
(questioningly)
- Mom? Is that Mom?
- Robert
- Who are you? What do you want here?
- Martin
(shaking his head with disbelief and yet emotionally torn by the sight of loved ones he's not seen in so many years)
- Why are you both here? How can you be here?
- 27. Med. long shot looking through the door
- As a woman appears behind Robert. She looks questioningly from Robert to
Martin.
- Woman
- Who is it? What do you want, young man?
Martin takes a step toward them. His nervously shaking hands extend outward as if to embrace them.
- Martin
- Mom, don't you know me? It's Martin.
- Woman
- Martin?
- (and then wide-eyes, frightened, to her husband in a stage whisper)
- He's a lunatic or something.
Robert is about to close the door and Martin sticks a foot against it.
- Martin
- Wait a moment. Mom, you mustn't be frightened of me. This is Martin. I grew up here.
- (and then unable to understand the enormity of the mystery)
- What's the matter with you both? Don't you know your own son?
Robert starts to push the door closed and Martin struggles with him, trying
to keep it open.
- Martin
- Dad, please. Mom, look at me. Dad...
But the door is closed tight in his face now and he stands there staring at
it. He takes a step back away from the door, turns to face the street,
his face a mask now, totally unable to comprehend. Then very slowly his
eyes go down toward the porch floor and the newspaper.
- 28. Track shot
- As he slowly walks down the steps of the porch to the sidewalk.
- 29. Long shot a 1934 Roadster
- Sitting at the curb. A big sign is pasted on it. "This brand new 1934 Roadster
to be given away free at the legion hall, Thursday night. Buy your
chances now at the high school!"
- 30. Close shot Martin
- Reacting.
- 31. Close shot lettering "1934"
- On the sign.
- 32. Close shot Martin
- As he slowly turns away to look back toward his house, staring at it with
a strange mixture of hunger and disbelief.
FADE TO BLACK
END ACT ONE
ACT TWO
FADE ON:
- 33. Ext. Park [Day] A long shot down a tree-lined path
- It's warm and summery and occasionally kids flit by carrying cotton candy,
ice cream cones, et al. Turning the bend and becoming visible facing
the camera is Martin. He walks slowly, drinking in the sights and
sounds as he does so. Off in the distance is the sound of a calliope,
its tinny, rag time dissonance so rich in nostalgia that Martin
has to pause momentarily and listen.
- 34. Track shot with him
- As he walks down the path taking in passing sights like an organ grinder,
a cotton candy vendor, a Good Humor man and children always
children. The path branches off and at this fork Martin stops and
looks across at a clearing.
CUT TO:
- 35. Reverse angle looking toward the clearing
- In the middle is a large band stand and pavilion set up with chairs in
preparation for the night concert. Several boys play around its
steps.
- 36. Track shot Martin
- As he walks toward the pavilion. He stands down at the foot of the steps
and looks up at it. A young woman wheeling a baby carriage pauses
close by. They exchange a look and the woman smiles.
- Martin
- Wonderful place, isn't it?
- Woman
- The park? It certainly is.
Martin listens for a moment as the calliope music can still be heard. Martin jerks his thumb in the direction of the music.
- Martin
- That's a part of summer, isn't it? The music from the merry-go-round. The calliope.
- Woman
(laughing)
- And the cotton candy. And the ice cream. And the band concert.
- Martin
(a little disjointed, unable to put into words the nostalgia he's feeling now)
- There isn't anything quite as good ever. Nothing quite as good as summer and being a kid.
- Woman
- Are you from around here?
- Martin
- No what I mean is I used to be. I lived just a couple of blocks away. I remember this band stand. I used to sneak away at night, lie over there on the grass staring up at the stars, listening to the music.
- (the recollection of this feeds his memory and makes him become voluble and excited)
- I played ball in that field over there.
- (he points)
- And that merry-go-round. Oh my goodness I grew up with that merry-go-round.
- (then his eyes darting around, he points up to one of the posts of the pavilion)
- I carved my name on that post one summer. I was eleven years old and I carved my name right on that
- 37. Flash shot a small boy
- About eleven. He has a pen knife out and is in the process of carving something
on the post.
- 38. Track shot Martin
- As he runs toward the post. The boy looks up frightened. He flings the
knife away and backs off. Martin reaches the post, grabs it and
stares down at it.
CUT TO:
- 39. Extremely tight close shot the post
- In a boyish scrawl carved in the wood is the name "MARTIN SLOAN."
- 40. Med. shot
- Martin whirls around to look down at the boy.
- Martin
- Martin Sloan? You're Martin Sloan?
The boy takes another step backwards, frightened by the intensity of Martin's
look and voice.
- Boy
- Yes, sir. But I didn't mean nothin', honest. Lots of kids carve their names here. No kiddin'. I'm not the first
- Martin
(interrupts, taking a step toward the boy)
- You're Martin Sloan. Sure, that's who you are. That's the way I looked
The boy is at this moment terribly frightened by the intensity on Martin's
face. He backs away down the steps and suddenly breaks into a run. Martin,
his face contorted with excitement and discovery, calls after the boy.
- Martin
- Martin! Martin, don't be frightened Hey, Martin
He starts to take a few running steps after the boy and then stops just a few
feet away from the pavilion.
- 41. Long angle shot looking down
- He turns very slowly to see the woman staring at him. There's a curiosity
on the woman's face and almost an accusation. Martin's voice is
hesitant now. He points in the direction of where the boy has run
and disappeared.
- Martin
- I didn't want to hurt him. I just wanted to talk to him...ask him some questions. I was going to tell him what would happen to him.
- (now he closes his eyes tightly and runs a hand over his forehead)
- I don't know. I really don't know.
- (now he opens his eyes)
- If it's a dream...I suppose I'll wake up.
- 42. Extremely tight close shot Martin's face
- As he looks off, listens to the sound of the music.
- Martin
(softly but with an intensity)
- But I don't want it to be a dream.
- (he looks at the woman now and there are tears in his eyes)
- I don't want time to pass now.
The woman, very, very ill at ease, with an attempt at nonchalance, starts to wheel the carriage away.
- Martin
- You don't understand, do you? Please. Let me tell you what's happened to me...
- (he takes a step after her)
- Please...
The woman continues to wheel the carriage away from him.
- 43. Long shot the woman
- She gets to one of the paths leading to the pavilion. She stops, turns
and looks at him again. At this point Martin walks hurriedly out
of the pavilion area.
DISSOLVE TO:
- 44. Ext. Street [Night] Med long shot
- Looking toward the front porch of the Sloan house. Robert sits on the porch
on a glider. There is the sound of the creak of the swinging back
and forth and other night sounds of crickets, a distant bull frog,
the soft rustle of a July wind.
THE CAMERA MOVES IN for a closer shot of Robert on the porch. He
suddenly inches forward on the glider, listening. There is the
sound of footsteps on the sidewalk beyond, then Robert rises and
moves to the top of the porch steps. The light from the lamp post
shines on his face.
- 45. Pan shot over to the front of the house and front path
- Martin stands there looking up toward the house. His foot touches something.
He looks down.
- 46. Close shot baseball mitt
- He bends down and picks it up.
- 47. Med. close shot Martin
- He puts the glove on his hand, pats out a pocket, smiles as he does so.
Then he takes a few steps toward the house. A bike is parked close
to the steps. Martin walks over to it, touches it, rings the bell
on the handlebar. Then he looks up at his father who is staring
at him from the porch.
- 48. Close shot Robert
- He's interested now but not frightened.
- Robert
- Back again, huh?
- 49. Two shot both men
- Martin
(nods)
- I had to come back. This is my house.
- (he looks down at the glove in his hand)
- This is mine, too. You bought it for me on my eleventh birthday.
- (then he looks up toward his father)
- What about the baseball that Lou Gehrig autographed? Where's that?
- 50. Close shot Robert
- As he reacts. He takes the pipe out of his mouth, looks intensely at the
younger man.
- Robert
(softly)
- Who are you? What do you want here?
- 51. Med. shot
- He strikes a match and in the brief flare he studies Martin's face.
- Martin
- I just want to rest. I just want to stop running for a while. I belong here. Don't you understand, Pop? I belong here.
- Robert
(his voice very gentle)
- Look, son, you're probably sick. You've got delusions or something. And I don't want to hurt you and I don't want you to get into any trouble either. But you better get out of here or there will he trouble.
At this moment Mrs. Sloan comes out.
- Mrs. Sloan
- Who you talking to, Rob
She stops abruptly, eyes wide, when she sees Martin standing at the foot of the steps. She hurriedly goes over to her husband.
- Martin
- Mom, won't you look at me? Look into my face. You can tell, can't you?
He takes a step up the porch. The woman shrinks back against her husband. Martin's face is in the light of the street lamp.
- Martin
- Mom, just look at me. Please. Who am I? Tell me who I am.
- Mrs. Sloan
- You're a stranger. I've never seen you before. Robert, tell him to go away.
- Martin
- You're got a son named Martin, haven't you? He goes to Emerson Public School. The month of August he spends at his aunt's farm near Buffalo, and a couple of summers you've gone up to Saratoga Lake and rented a cottage there. And once I had a sister and she died when she was a year old.
- Mrs. Sloan
(frightened, to her husband)
- Where's Martin now?
Martin grabs her. He's beyond logic now, beyond caring. He has one single preoccupation
and this is to prove who he is. He grabs his mother.
- Martin
- I'm Martin! I'm your son! You've got to believe me. I'm your son Martin.
- (with one free hand he grabs at his wallet and pulls it out and starts tearing into the cards and identification inside)
- See? See? All my cards are in here. All my identification. Read them. Go ahead, read them.
- (he tries to force them on her)
- Please. They'll show you
The woman, desperately frightened, struggling to get away, suddenly hauls off
and slaps Martin across the face. The wallet slips out of his hand and
there's a dead silence. Martin slowly looks up to look from one to the
other.
CUT TO:
- 52. Close shot of each
- As they stare back at him.
- 53. Med. group shot
- He slowly turns away, walks back to the top of the steps, looks down at
the baseball glove that he's laid there.
- 54. Track shot of him
- As he walks down the steps, down the front path to the gate.
He pauses, looks back toward the house.
- 55. Long shot the house
- His father and mother standing there watching him. He opens the gate, steps
out, stands there aimlessly for a moment.
- 56. Close shot Martin
- As his head jerks up when he hears the sound of the distant calliope. It
grows louder and louder until it is way out of proportion, discordant,
loud, shrieking, and he starts to run, shouting as he does.
- Martin
- Martin! Martin, I've got to talk to you. Martin.
- 57. Long angle shot
- As he runs toward the park.
DISSOLVE TO:
- 58. Ext. Park [Night] Long shot down the path
- It is now lit by street lamps. Off on the right is the light of the calliope
and the music. On the left is the sound of the band in the pavilion
and over this are a thousand voices and sounds of laughter, soda
pop, popcorn popping the sounds of summer.
- 59. Med. close shot Martin
- As he steps out of the shadows and comes into the periphery of light thrown
by one of the lamp posts. He looks tired now and yet compelled.
His face is tense, nervous, but gradually softens, as all the sounds
and the music penetrate his consciousness and once again he succumbs
to the poignance that comes with nostalgia. He walks down the path
and pauses near the clearing to the pavilion listening to the music.
- 60. Close shot his profile
- As he listens and then smiles. He takes a few steps into the clearing,
leans on a tree for a moment and slowly lets himself sink to the
ground. He lies there with his hands behind his head staring up
at the sky, listening to the band music. Pretty soon quite unconsciously
he begins to hum the tune that the band is playing and he is suddenly
aware of someone else humming the tune in a boyish tone. Startled,
he bolts upright to a sitting position, looks to his right and
there he sees Martin the boy. The boy jumps up with a hushed, frightened
cry and begins to run.
- 61. Long shot looking down the path
- As the boy races down it and disappears around the bend. There is a beat
and then Martin appears behind him running after him.
- 62. Moving shot through the crowd
- Near the calliope as the boy pushes his way through people. A few feet
behind him is Martin. The boy reaches the ticket taker stand and
tries to force his way through.
- Ticket Taker
- Nope, son. Not without a ticket, you don't.
The boy whirls around staring at Martin who has almost reached him now. He
ducks under the turnstile and jumps on the merry-go-round. The ticket
taker starts to shout and point toward him when suddenly he's pushed
aside by Martin.
- 63. Angle shot looking down on the merry-go-round
- As the man and boy thread their way past the horses that go up and down.
- 64-67. Closer shots in between the horses
- First the boy's face and then Martin's, first covered by the horses as
they go up, then revealed as the horses go down. Each time the
boy's face looks more and more petrified and frozen with fear and
each time they appear and reappear Martin is closer until suddenly
we
CUT TO:
- 68. Flash shot
- In this brief moment they are now face to face with nothing between them.
Martin holds out his hands pleadingly supplicatingly.
- Martin
- Marty, I don't want to hurt you, son. I just want to tell you something
Martin! Please. Let me talk to you. Let me tell you something.
- 69. Close shot the boy
- As he looks over his shoulder. We see the machinery of the merry-go-round
from the moving platform on which the boy stands. Martin takes
a step toward him now.
- Martin
- Marty, please son
At this point the boy, frantic, jumps toward the machinery. We hear his scream
as we
CUT TO:
- 70. Flash shot Martin
- As he too screams in pain and grabs his leg.
- 71. Tight close shot the merry-go-round operator's face
- His eyes dilate with horror. A woman screams.
- 72. Close shot operator's hand on the level
- As he pulls it back with a giant squeaking sound.
- 73. Angle shot looking up toward the horses
- As people race toward the center of the merry-go-round. Ad lib voices can
be heard over the din.
- 74. Long angle shot looking down toward the area around the merry-go-round
- As the little boy is gently carried out.
- 75. Close shot profile of the little boy's body
- As he's carried past. One leg looks misshapen under the torn, oily trouser
leg. Across this leg we see Martin who has pushed his way to the
front of the crowd and looks horror struck toward the figure of
the boy.
CUT TO:
- 76. Long angle shot looking down on the area
- Pretty soon the place becomes deserted and only Martin stands there. The
merry-go-round slows down and keeps slowing down until finally
it stops. The lights go out leaving the place in shadows. Martin
walks through the turnstile over to one of the wooden horses. He
sees the boy's cap lying there and he picks it up.
- Martin
(very softly and gently)
- I only wanted to tell you. I only wanted to tell you this is the wonderful time for you. Don't let any of it go by without...without enjoying it. There won't be any more merry-go-rounds. No more cotton candy. No more band concerts. I only wanted to tell you that this is the wonderful time now here! That's all, Martin. That's all I wanted to tell you. God help me, that's all I wanted to tell you.
SERIES OF DISSOLVES:
- 77-80. Different angles
- The immobile, silent wooden horses. The calliope, etc.
DISSOLVE TO:
- 81. Ext. Merry-go-round [Night]
- It's now very late. The CAMERA PANS over for a shot of Martin sitting on
the edge of the merry-go-round. One leg is stretched out stiffly
in front of him. He looks up at the sound of footsteps.
- 82. Long shot looking toward the turnstile
- As his father comes into the frame and walks toward him, stopping just
a few feet from him.
- 83. Two shot the two men
- Robert
- I thought you'd want to know the boy will be all right. He may limp some the doctor says, but he'll be all right.
- Martin
- I thank God for that.
Robert takes Martin's wallet out of his pocket, hands it to him, then he takes
a pipe out and lights it. And once again in the glare of the match the
two men look at one another.
- Robert
- You dropped this by the house. I looked inside.
- Martin
- And?
- Robert
- It told quite a few things about you. Driver's license, cards, the money in it. It seems that you're Martin Sloan. You're thirty-six years old. You have an apartment in New York.
- (a pause)
- And it says your license expires in 1960. That's twenty-five years from now. The dates on the bills. Those dates haven't come yet either.
- 84. Close shot Martin
- As he stares at his father.
- Martin
- You know now then, don't you?
- 85. Two shot
- Robert
(looks at him for a long moment, softly)
- Yes, I know. I know who you are and I know you've come from a long ways from here. A long ways and...and a long time. I don't know why or how do you?
Martin shakes his head.
- Robert
- But you know other things, don't you, Martin? Things that will happen.
- Martin
(nods)
- Yes, I do.
- Robert
- You also know when your month and I...when we'll...
- Martin
(in a whisper)
- Yes, I know that too.
- Robert
(takes the pipe out of his mouth, studies it for a moment)
- Don't tell me. There's a saying. "Every man is put on earth condemned to die. Time and method of execution unknown." That's a part of the mystery we live with. It must always be a mystery.
- (then he rises)
- Martin.
- Martin
(looks up at him)
- Yes, Dad?
- Robert
(puts his hand on Martin's shoulder)
- You have to leave here. There's no room for you...and there's no place. Do you understand?
- Martin
(nods, slowly)
- I see that now. But I don't understand. Why not?
- Robert
(softly)
- I guess because we only get one chance.
- (a crooked smile)
- Maybe there's only one summer to a customer.
- (and then with great compassion)
- The little boy...the one I know. The one who belongs here. This is his summer, Martin. Just as it was yours one time. Don't make him share it.
Martin rises. He walks slowly down the steps, pauses at the foot and stares
off into the night.
- Robert
- Is it...is it so bad where you're from?
- Martin
- I thought so. I've been living...I've been living at a dead run, Dad. I was so tired. And then...one day...I knew I had to come back. I had to come back to get on a merry-go-round and listen to a band concert and eat cotton candy. I had to stop and breathe and close my eyes and smell and listen.
- Robert
(very softly)
- I guess we all want that. But, Martin, when you go back...maybe you'll find that there are merry-go-rounds and band concerts where you are. Maybe you haven't looked in the right place. You've been looking behind you, Martin. Try looking ahead.
- Martin
- Maybe. Goodbye, Dad.
Robert nods and starts to walk away. He stops by the turnstile and turns.
- Robert
(gently)
- Goodbye...son.
- 86. Close shot Martin
- As he stands there. He looks down at the wallet, taps at it thoughtfully
with a finger and then slowly puts it inside his coat. Then he
turns and looks at the merry-go-round.
- 87. Med. long shot his p.o.v.
- Of the horses. The lights go on suddenly, and there is the creak as the
merry-go-round starts to turn. He climbs up on the platform and
stands holding one of the posts that go up and down with the horses
and starts to go around with it.
- 88. Pan shot with him as he moves
- 89. Pan shot of the calliope
- Where the music's coming from.
ABRUPT CUT TO:
- 90. Med close shot a juke box
- As it blares out rock-n-roll.
PULL BACK FOR
- 91. Int. Drugstore [Day]
- It's the same drugstore we've seen except now it's done in chrome, leather
and flash. It's plastered with advertising signs, suggesting the
purchase of everything from filtered cigarettes to reducing pills
and tranquilizers. The soda jerk is no longer Charlie. Martin comes
in through the front door. He walks with a stiff gait and goes
over to the soda fountain.
- Soda Jerk
- Hi. Something for you?
The music now stops and the two young couples go to a booth laughing and talking.
Martin looks over at them for a moment, then turns back to the soda jerk.
- Martin
- Maybe a chocolate soda, huh? Three dips?
- Soda Jerk
- Three? I can make one with three dips for you. It'll be extra. Thirty-five cents. Okay?
- Martin
(smiles at him)
- Thirty-five cents, huh?
- (his eyes scan the room)
- How about old Mr. Wilson? Used to own this place.
- Soda Jerk
- Oh, he died. Long time ago. Must be fifteen twenty years. What kind of ice cream you want? Chocolate? Vanilla?
- Martin
(looks at him for moment)
- I've changed my mind. Guess I'll pass on the soda.
- (he rises off the stool, doing so with difficulty, his stiff leg getting in the way)
- These stools weren't built for bum legs, were they?
- Soda Jerk
- Guess not. Get it in the war?
- Martin
- No. No, as a matter of fact I got it falling off the merry-go-round when I was a kid. Freak thing. Fell into the machinery.
- Soda Jerk
- The merry-go-round? Oh, yeah, I do remember. They tore that down a few years ago. Condemned it.
- (then with a smile)
- A little late I guess, huh?
- Martin
- How's that?
- Soda Jerk
- A little late for you I mean.
- Martin
(looks away, very softly)
- Very late. Very late for me.
He starts to walk slowly across the room and out the door.
DISSOLVE TO:
- 92. Ext. Road [Day] Long shot Martin walking
- 93. Ext. Gas Station [Day]
- As Martin enters and we can see him talking to the attendant.
DISSOLVE TO:
- 94. The red car
- With Martin in it as it pulls onto the highway from the gas station, pauses
there.
- 95. Med. close shot Martin
- As he looks in both directions and in doing so lets his gaze fall on a
roadsign.
- 96. Close shot road sign
- It reads "Homewood 1 1/2 miles."
- 97. Close shot Martin
- As he reacts. Just the briefest moment of thought, then he puts the car
into low gear.
- 98. Long angle shot looking down
- As the car slowly starts onto the highway. Over the disappearing car we
hear the Narrator's Voice.
- Narrator's Voice
- Martin Sloan, age thirty-six. Vice president in charge of media. Successful in most things but not in the one effort that all men try at some time in their lives trying to go home again.
- (a pause)
- And also like all men perhaps there'll be an occasion...maybe a summer night some time...when he'll look up from what he's doing and listen to the distant music of a calliope and hear the voices and the laughter of the people and the places of his past. And perhaps across his mind there'll flit a little errant wish...that a man might not have to become old never outgrow the parks and the merry-go-rounds of his youth.
- (a pause)
- And he'll smile then too because he'll know it is just an errant wish. Some wisp of memory not too important really. Some laughing ghosts that cross a man's mind...that are a part of The Twilight Zone.
Now the CAMERA PANS back down the road to the sign that reads "Homewood
1 1/2 miles."
Fade to black. |